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08 November 2009 @ 07:07 pm
The Cave of Eternal Promise 16 part 2  


Title: The Cave of The Eternal Promise
Pairing: Akame
Genre: up to NC17
Summary: Kamenashi was just an ordinary archeology student who had always dreamed of making a huge discovery. And one day he did, he made a discovery that would change his life forever.


Chapter 16 part 1

“What is this?” Jin asked

“It is the last roll of Kame’s diary. I found them at the temple where Kame decided to spend the rest of his life at” Kamenashi explained. He unrolled the paper and pointed at a specific part.

Jin looked at the paper roll in his hand. He read the part where the man in front of him pointed at, the man who he had believed as the reincarnation of his lover.

“It…it can’t be” Jin weakly said, he couldn’t believe it. The paper said that Kame died as a holly monk. And Jin knew a holly monk cannot be reincarnated. So this means that the person who was standing in front of him was not Kame, his lover.

“I’m sorry Jin…I’m not Kame,” I wish I am.

But he didn’t hear any respond from Jin. Kame was afraid. He was waiting for Jin to say something, but he didn’t. The other man just stand there still, eyes on the paper and didn’t say a word.

And suddenly the ground started moving again.

Jin slowly lifted up his face and Kamenashi could see the same eyes that he once afraid of. “Do you have any idea how long I have waited for you Kame! How long I have waited for this moment, the moment where we could see each other again. And now you’re telling me that you are not Kame? That my Kame has left me alone? That he didn’t keep his promise to be together with me again?!”

Jin lifted his hand to cupped the younger’s face and when Kamenashi thought that he would kiss him again, the hand moved lower to his neck and Jin started strangling him

“No Jin! S-stop it” Kamenashi screamed when he felt Jin was deliberately strangling him. “J-Jin…please” he pleaded while at the same time trying so hard to breath. His eyes are getting blurry again and he was starting to feel dizzy.

But Jin didn’t stop. In fact the grip was getting stronger.

But when Kamenashi was about to give up, when he was ready for the worst, suddenly Jin stopped. The ground has stopped moving, and the hands that were choking him earlier were loosening. Kamenashi coughed, trying to get as much of air as possible. He didn’t know what make Jin stopped but whatever it is he as glad that Jin stopped trying to kill him.

He looked at the older man in front of him, wondering what make him stop and he saw something strange on Jin’s eyes. He was silence and he was looking at somewhere else.

“Kame?” he heard Jin whispered but his eyes were not at him. “Kame is that you?” Jin said again.

Kamenashi was confused. Who was Jin talking to? He was about to ask him when suddenly Jin was saying something again.

 “I see….I understand now” Jin nodded and smiled. He turns his attention back to the confusing young boy next to him.

“I believe you now” He said.

“W-what?” Kamenashi was surely confused now.

“Kame has returned to me” Jin answered, still smiling to him and the eyes were back to the friendly pair of eyes again. “The real Kame” he continued.

“Huh?” Kamenashi still didn’t understand what Jin was talking about.

Jin smiled and pointed to an empty space “He’s there.”

Kamenashi frowned in confusion but seeing Jin’s smile he knew that Kame has returned. He was back to take Jin with him.

“He said he’s been waiting for me. He wants me to follow him,” Jin explained again. “But not before I apologize to you.”  He continued, pouting like a small boy. He turn his head to face Kamenashi properly bore saying, “I’m sorry Kame,” he said sincerely “I mean Kazuya…that is your name right?” Jin asked, smiling.

Kamenashi nodded.

“Well I better go now, Kame is waiting for me” Jin said, smiling and leaning to whisper “I was hoping you are my Kame though” Kamenashi could feel the other smirking while saying that.

“Ouch!” Jin protested at something Kamenashi couldn’t understand and he was rubbing his head as if in pain. “I was just joking Kame!” Jin pouted. It’s funny to see one second the young lord could be a scary as a devil and the next second he’s as cute as a child

Kamenashi finally understand what was going on now. And he was glad that Kame showed himself and come to save him. Now he believed that the two lover will have their happy ending. He nodded, smiling as a respond.

“Bye Kazuya…” Jin said again before finally walking to where he believe Kame was. Kamenashi watched as Jin’s figure slowly disappeared.

 

“I hope you guys are happy.” He wished as Jin’s figure completely disappeared

 

---

 

“Finally you are back!” Kamenashi was welcomed by a very worried Ueda. “I though I’m going to have to call the rescue team again.”

“How long have I been away?” Kamenashi asked. He knew he was only gone for a couple of hours, but from his past experience other people would feel that he has been gone for days.

“Almost two days,” Ueda answered.

“Well, I’m here now. Let’s go home!”

“So how was it?” Ueda asked when the two was walking their way out from the cave.

Kamenashi explained everything that has happened inside the cave. Ueda was surprised when he told him that the real Kame showed up. Kamenashi didn’t tell him that Jin was trying to strangle him to death. He didn’t want his best friend to be worried “So now everything is okay.” He said in conclusion.

Ueda sighed in relief but he knew that deep down in his best friend’s heart, Kamenashi was sad.

“Are you disappointed?”

“What do you mean?”

“Well, I think you are starting to like this zombie lord.” Ueda chuckled.

“He’s not a zombie!” Kamenashi protested.

“Well he’s dead, and he came back to live…what do you call that?”

“Whatever!”

Ueda chuckled again at his friend’s reply. “Don’t worry, we’ll find you a boyfriend!”

“I don’t need a boyfriend!” Kamenashi protested again but Ueda kept on teasing him.

But suddenly Ueda’s phone was ringing, and Kamenashi felt he was saved by the bell.

“It’s Ryo!” Ueda said excitedly as he looked at the screen. “Moshi-moshi Ryo!”

 “Hey babe!” Ryo replied from the other line.

“Ryo! I missed you so much!”

“I missed you too!”

“Where are you now? Are you back in Japan?”

“Yup! I’m in Tokyo now. I went to your apartment to surprise you but you weren’t there”

Ueda could hear the younger one pouted. “I’m sorry, but the research was expanded. We have some things to take care of,” Ueda said, looking at Kamenashi who was just rolling his eyes in respond as if to say ‘you were the one who wanted to come along’

“But it’s all done now. I’m going back to Tokyo tomorrow morning” Ueda continued.

“Good! Cause I can’t stand one more night without you.”

Ueda blushed at his boyfriend’s word and Kamenashi couldn’t help but to feel jealous at whatever Ryo said to Ueda. He wished he have someone who loves him just like Ryo loves Ueda.

“Okay, wait for me okay?”

“Will definitely do!”

Ueda smiled, he couldn’t wait to meet Ryo again.

 “Hey one more thing” Ryo said just when Ueda was about to hang up.

“Yea?”

“I met my childhood friend in LA. It has been a long time since we saw each other. He’s visiting Japan now and he’s staying with me. I’ll introduce him to you later.”

“Oh. Ok! Is he cute?”

“Hime!”

Ueda chuckled. “I was just asking, if he’s cute I’m thinking of introducing him to Kame.” Kamenashi frowned upon hearing the mention of his name.

“Kame? You mean Kamenashi?”

“Yup!”

“Stop calling me Kame!” Kamenashi protested.

“But it suits you!” Ueda reasoned but was replied by a smack on his head “ouch!”

“What’s going on?” Ryo wondered what was happening on the other line

 “Sorry, Kame was just being excited” another smack “Tatchan!”

“Okay. I’ll introduce him to Kame too. See you soon princess!”

“See you. I love you”

“I love you too” Ryo replied before he ended his call.

Ueda closed his phone with a wide grin spread on his face. “I know a way to make you forget that zombie lord.”

 

 

---

 

 

I told you I don’t want to come!” Kamenashi protested when Ueda dragged him out from his room to meet his boyfriend.

“But Kame. It’s better than just locking yourself in your room and moping over that zombie lord!” Ueda reasoned.

“I was not moping over Jin, I was studying! And stop calling me Kame!” Kame protested again.

“You ARE moping and I told you the name suits you!”

Kame was about to protest again when he realized that they have reach the restaurant where Ryo said he would meet them.

“We’re here” Ueda said before opening the door “Let’s go! There’s Ryo!” Ueda was beaming happily and run to where his boyfriend was. “Ryo!” he said before hugging the younger man

 “Hime I know you miss the sexy body of mine, but I need to breath” Ryo said exaggerating when he obviously like hugging his princess.

Ueda reluctantly let go of his hug, “But I missed you” he pouted and Ryo couldn’t help but to chuckle at his boyfriend cuteness. He leaned down to give him a kiss which was responded happily by Ueda.

“Ehemm!” Kamenashi coughed.

Ueda blushed realizing that they were just having a PDA in front of his friend, and the rest of the people in the restaurant for that matter. “Sorry Kame.” He murmured.

“Hi Kamenashi!” Ryo greeted.

“Hi Ryo!” Kamenashi greeted back.

“So where’s your friend?” Ueda asked when he realized that Ryo was alone.

“Oh he’s in the toilet. He’ll be back soon” Ryo explained. “Oh there he is!” He said as he saw someone walking towards their direction.

“Everyone, this is my best friend from LA.” Ryo introduced the man who was just arrived at their table.

Both Kamenashi and Ueda eyes widened in shock when they see man whom Ryo introduced as his friend.

 

 

 

THE END!

 

A/N:

Yes this IS the end. Pheeew~ finally! after what? a year? Two years? *gets bricked*

My biggest apology to all of you who were waiting for this fic. I know I have my ups and downs but hey! I finally finished this one *applauses for self*

As you all know I was so busy last year preparing my uni entry exam. N now I have managed to be in Japan and stalk the boys, so as I promised, I finished this thing…*sighs in relief* and just in time to celebrate our dear AKAME anniversary! So happy anniversary boys! Hope you two will get married someday

I’m sooo sorry If I didn’t reply your comments before, but I will surely will now! So people, read it and comment! I need your warm words to support me for my exam tmrw! Lol, instead of studying I’m writing a fic, what a diligent student!

Yoroshiku Onegaishimasu!

 

And yes…this is the end really




 
 
 
( 53 comments — Post a new comment )
blue-chan[info]blue_fire0013 on November 8th, 2009 10:23 am (UTC)
wow wow, an update after a looooong time~~~~~~

I'll read it and leave a proper comment later XDĐ
rheida[info]rheida on November 8th, 2009 01:47 pm (UTC)
lol, okay. I'll wait for ur proper comment then :P
(no subject) - [info]blue_fire0013 on November 8th, 2009 04:47 pm (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]rheida on November 8th, 2009 04:50 pm (UTC)
baby_choco[info]cadbury_choco on November 8th, 2009 10:54 am (UTC)
ehhh?????? want sequels pleaseee~~ *puppy eyes*...
rheida[info]rheida on November 8th, 2009 01:48 pm (UTC)
*grins widely*

I'll do it sometimes in in May...
May-be yes..May-be no..hahaha
kazu_kumaguro[info]kazu_kumaguro on November 8th, 2009 11:18 am (UTC)
NO!
At least epilogue please ;________________________;
rheida[info]rheida on November 8th, 2009 01:49 pm (UTC)
hmm...epilogue? or sequel?..lol
(no subject) - [info]kazu_kumaguro on November 9th, 2009 05:30 am (UTC)
diisa_pinky[info]diisa_pinky on November 8th, 2009 11:38 am (UTC)
now we need an epilogue!! and then maybe... you could write the sequel?? LOL~!!! okaeri :D
rheida[info]rheida on November 8th, 2009 01:49 pm (UTC)
lol...tadaima!
okay okay..i guess i need one. i just love the number 16..lol, not a good reason
Tiyah[info]tesshidk on November 8th, 2009 11:38 am (UTC)
öh I missed this fic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It was so good, and I'm happy that both Lord Akanishi and Kamenashi managed to find happiness with their respective lovers (well... I hope that Ryo's friend from LA will become Kame's lover ^^)
Thanks for this fic.
rheida[info]rheida on November 8th, 2009 01:50 pm (UTC)
you're welcomed..and thanks for reading it too ^_^
Arisa[info]arisa_draconis on November 8th, 2009 12:03 pm (UTC)
Epilouge please!

Btw, I read all 16 chapters just now XD
rheida[info]rheida on November 8th, 2009 01:51 pm (UTC)
lol...u're fast then! ^_^. well thanks for reading..and i'll think about the epilogue part :P
Yukachan21[info]yukachan21 on November 8th, 2009 12:49 pm (UTC)
WELCOME BACK!!!!~ (><) *HUGS YOU*

Because i cried so much in the chapter 15, and stopped and now shocked at the end

YOU NEED TO MAKE A EPILOGUE!!!! lol!!!! if you want to that is.. (><)

your update was very much satisfying except the last bit BECAUSE YOU STOP! lol! sorry, if sounded mean. didn't mean to sound mean. It's just that...... you stopped i was like NOOOOOOOOOO!

and before you decide of writing an epilogue or not....
GOOD LUCK FOR YOUR UNI EXAMS!!!
rheida[info]rheida on November 8th, 2009 01:52 pm (UTC)
*HUGS BACK*
thanks! i know i know..im so mean. i just like the number 16 and i wanted to post on akame's anniversary..lol...but i'll see about that epilogue :P
Maï: Akame - Chu~♥[info]kerua on November 8th, 2009 01:00 pm (UTC)
I just read all the 16 chapters XD
This story was awesome,Kame and Jin story made me cry :(

Eeeeh,you can't end it there >_< I going to do like everyone else: I demand an epilogue or a sequel of some sort! D=
rheida[info]rheida on November 8th, 2009 02:00 pm (UTC)
thanks! I wont promise to make epilogue or not..cos if u notice ive been writing for almost two years lol..i just dun wanna keep everyone waiting again..i felt so bad :(. but i'll think about it..i just hv to concentrate on my exam now :P
(no subject) - [info]kerua on November 8th, 2009 03:14 pm (UTC)
Benevolence[info]duel_pilot_yzak on November 8th, 2009 01:01 pm (UTC)
yeay~! finally...

the ending part for Jin in this chapter was kind of rushed but it was okay...at least he gets to be with his real Kame this time.

The long wait for this chapter was worth it. Good thing you didn't gave up on this fic. It was such a nice story.

Are you really sure this is the end? no more sequel? It would be nice for Kazuya to have a happy ending of his own in a sequel. But that still depends on you.

Anyway thanks for updating this fic and finishing it.
rheida[info]rheida on November 8th, 2009 02:10 pm (UTC)
yea i think so too...well...maybe i just want to finish this fic..lol. i wanted it to end like this , yea..cos d main story is Kame n Lord Jin..well they r both dead so..XDD
but anyway. we'll see whether i hv the mood to write an epi or even a sequel:)
thanks for reading!
Na-chan[info]babe_pig on November 8th, 2009 01:21 pm (UTC)
Omg you updated. I so waited for this. Yeah,everyone has his happiness ne
rheida[info]rheida on November 8th, 2009 02:11 pm (UTC)
lo..yup! everyone including me! cos i finally finish this fic! *happy*
xstewpigx[info]xstewpigx on November 8th, 2009 04:42 pm (UTC)
Finally! Haven't read it though. Beta-ed? If not email me again. Gmail please...
rheida[info]rheida on November 8th, 2009 04:49 pm (UTC)
nope! not yet, was going to send you but u seems busy...:P
but okay, i'll send u if u dun mind :) missed you!
Caiy: jin2[info]caiycaiy on November 8th, 2009 08:12 pm (UTC)
read it all in one shot. and im soo GLAD!!!

im not going to lie...i cried ;__;
like i literally cried in around chapter 14/15

like im sure a lot of people have already asked...but please do make a sequel or atleast an epilogue. please???

this was totally mesmerising. i mean the whole love story between jin and his kame was sooo lovely. they went through soo much and it's soo unfair how they couldn't live a happy life while they were living. but the wait and years they spent away from eachother was worth it. for they found eachother in the end.

the main reason i want a sequel or epilogue is bcus i really wanna see kazu meet the jin from LA. and then MAYBE see a tiny glimpse of the deceased jin&kame, that'd actually be funny ! or like the guy from LA is named Hayato O_o

ahhhah kk i'll stop now.
but really, i just wanna say thank you so much for this.
it was really great reading this especially all at once.
and i really liked the way you wrote this.
♥♥♥♥♥
rheida[info]rheida on November 10th, 2009 10:07 am (UTC)
Well thanks to you too for reading this...it took me alot of time to finish it..so u're lucky u read it in one go since u dont hv to wait for two years LOL
Ocyra[info]ocyra on November 8th, 2009 09:00 pm (UTC)
hey
I just read it all
I must say I had to restrain myself really hard in order no to kill you for stopping there
I have read through all fick and anticipated the end for you to stop there
*sights* ok, I'm calming down
anyway, i really really really liked it
cried even
and am hoping for an epilogue
rheida[info]rheida on November 10th, 2009 10:08 am (UTC)
wooo...you're scary! *hides behind the wall*

okay okay...I'll think about the epi or sequel..whichever..in time...hehehe

thanks so much for reading!
Chika[info]chika1611 on November 8th, 2009 11:15 pm (UTC)
Awww... finally, happy end. Ryo and Ueda are such a cute lovers, lol!

And.............. will you a make sequel about Akame's relationship???? *puppy eyes attack*
rheida[info]rheida on November 10th, 2009 10:08 am (UTC)
that puppy eyes are scary..LOL
Well i wont promise anything, but I'll think about it ok?
(no subject) - [info]chika1611 on November 10th, 2009 02:53 pm (UTC)
helbus_421[info]helbus_421 on November 9th, 2009 04:15 am (UTC)
hisashiburi, and okaeri, wahhh omg its finally over? but but you like totally didnt reveal who this person *cough cough* "Jin" is. lawlz i love Zombie Jin and Ghost Kame scene, its was so sweet.
hehe ganbatte ne on your exam and i really hope for a sequel or even an epilogue will do but really a sequel would be love. thanks for such a romantic/tragic/happy fic. -3-
rheida[info]rheida on November 10th, 2009 10:10 am (UTC)
hisashiburi da ne?...
thanks for your support! exam still not over but i really hope i can dedicate sometime to write..I still have other fic to finish *sighs*..but I'll think about the epi or sequel..:)
akameonly[info]akameonly on November 9th, 2009 04:30 am (UTC)
OMFG.........

i read this all in one go.............................

@_____@
l

that was lovely, heavenly, divine, epic, monumental.......GOD....that was akame........
@________@
rheida[info]rheida on November 10th, 2009 10:11 am (UTC)
LOL...I actually started this fic two years ago..so u're lucky to be able to read them in one go..LOL

Thanks alot for reading!
fyad7: ut scarf[info]fyad7 on November 9th, 2009 04:39 am (UTC)
yay! you updated!!! i'm happy for lord jin and kazuya, but i want to hear more about ryo's friend from la!!! please! anyways, thanks for updating!!!
rheida[info]rheida on November 10th, 2009 10:11 am (UTC)
yay! I updated! lol..i'm so happy myself i can FINALLY finish this fic..well not really if ppl still want an epi *sighs*...we'll see about that LOL

THANKS!
lia.[info]gachapin18 on November 9th, 2009 12:05 pm (UTC)
oh my God, i've waited for this for soooooo long ;___; you don't know how happy i am when i saw this update. i mean, srsly. this is my most favorite akame fic ever ♥

thank you so much for writing this story.

p.s. epilogue please :DDD
lia.[info]gachapin18 on November 9th, 2009 12:07 pm (UTC)
epilogue scratch that, sequel please :DDD
(no subject) - [info]rheida on November 10th, 2009 10:12 am (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]gachapin18 on November 10th, 2009 10:40 am (UTC)
kawai_ai[info]kawai_ai on November 9th, 2009 03:26 pm (UTC)
eh~~~~~~~~~~ it's finished already?????? i want more~~~~~~~~ plase make a sequel or make another fic, your story is really amazing~~~~

thank u so much for sharing this~~~~~~~~~~ and congrat for finish on this story~~~~~~~~~~~~
rheida[info]rheida on November 10th, 2009 10:13 am (UTC)
yup! it's finished! *evil laugh*
another fic?? LOL..we'll see
Thanks alot for reading!
lolli: Akame - bite-fetish[info]baka_lolli on November 10th, 2009 01:35 am (UTC)
Amazing story!!!!
I read it in one go and was really moved to tears at some parts of Kame's biography. ;_;
I was also surprised that Kamenashi is not the Kame from the past but the ending part made up for it very much!!!!! <333333

Congrats for finishing! :D
rheida[info]rheida on November 10th, 2009 10:14 am (UTC)
THANK YOU!!!
nice icon btw ^_^
pleyr_04: green blouse and shoulders expoosed[info]pleyr_04 on November 10th, 2009 03:38 am (UTC)
OMG!!! finally! finally!
i thought u weren't gonna update this anymore!
i've been waiting for this.

they're finally together.

i love this story! i swear!

yep! and i agree with the sequel. i kinda feel bad for kame.
i hope u make one! ^_^


congrats for this one!
rheida[info]rheida on November 10th, 2009 10:15 am (UTC)
yup! finally eh? LOL
I know..Ive been such a bad writer LOL
sequel??? T_T we'll see about tit :P
THANKS!
kamelli[info]kamelli on November 13th, 2009 03:58 am (UTC)
Oh it's finally done!! Omedetou!! I'm actually satisfied with the ending even after a long wait (I can remember myself stalking your lj every week but it seems I'm very late in reading this. I'm such a loser,ne?). Thanks for writing this wonderful fic. Hope we'll be seeing more fics from you coz you're a great writer!! :)
~ Min-chan @ Rai-chan ~[info]raixas on December 24th, 2009 03:49 pm (UTC)
Why didn't i notice this...*brick head* *blaming streamyx*
It's finished for almost a month...*sobs*
But anyway, perfect ending!! ^^
tsukiko_04[info]tsukiko_04 on February 25th, 2010 06:28 am (UTC)
It's the end!
I bet Ryo's best friend is Jin right? *grin widely*
I finally able to read this...
Thank you so much for writing this!
*bows deeply*
starg8fan_liz: Jin Akanishi[info]starg8fan_liz on March 3rd, 2010 07:31 am (UTC)
That was an awesome fic!!! though the ending seemed to be like a beginning to another story XD Love that you ended it their though. Really good story!!!
 
 

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